The saying goes: Cameras never lies. However, as the technology became more and more advanced, a lot of pictures could be adjusted. Many of the pictures we see today are colored or shaded. The pictures posted on BEC can serve as a good example. The pictures on the right are different from the ones on the left because they were in brighter colors. What’s more, the stars' slender figure and wrinkles were modified using computer effect.
When celebrities are being snapped a shot, they don’t need to show their feelings. What really shows is the moment they being taken a picture. Cameras can now be used anywhere and anytime because they have a lot of functions to choose from. For example, if it’s night time I could choose a day time mode.
Next time when I see beautiful pictures of celebrities or the famous, I would definitely think twice before saying how great they look.
Hi, Gerda,
回覆刪除I like the way you tried to complicate your sentence structures. Very impressive! Also,你的文意敘述也算流暢。
Yet, I would like you to fix some minor mistakes I found in this piece. 'taken picture'的taken其實是多餘的，說picture就行了，不過記得用複數形。另外，according to the picture "posted(被動)"，而非post。而acrroding to較不適合這邊的本文連貫，用"The pictures posted on BEC can serve as a good example."會來得更順暢。
最後兩句若能適當用逗號，可以幫助讀者方便閱讀。
最後，若你能將本文章跟人生經驗或生活做連結，將會更棒!
Thank you for advices John. :D
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